I
am rather exasperated that I forgot to address one other intriguing element in The
Daring Decoy. It’s just possible that Hamilton’s supposed secretary Leon
was heard sometimes, after all.
An
unidentified man talks to Hamilton on the intercom in Hamilton’s office,
letting him know of an arrival to see him. Hamilton thanks him and says to send
him in. Was he talking to Leon? Unless he has more than one male secretary, or
had a male receptionist at one time, it’s likely.
This
fellow had a very deep voice, which is a bit difficult to equate with the image
of Leon I designed in my mind. Actually, I had a different image of Leon before
I tried drawing him, and when I drew him, I ended up with someone a lot younger
(and with wilder hair!) than my original envisioning. And now that that
character is an established part of my stories, I’m a bit unsure of what to do
about this deep-voiced person in canon who may be the real Leon.
I
guess it’s certainly possible that even the version of Leon I ended up drawing
could have a deep voice, going against type. But it’s certainly going to be
hard to start hearing him with that voice in my mind, since I’ve been hearing
him with a much different voice. I wish I’d remembered (or that someone else
had remembered and told me) about that bit in The Daring Decoy before I
designed Leon. And I’ll have to look through other early episodes to see if
Hamilton speaks with this person at any other times. I’m very curious now!
I
had thought I was drawing nigh to the conclusion of The Malevolent Mugging.
It was scheduled to launch directly into a sequel, possibly called The
Gruesome Graveyard. Hence, a lot of loose ends were to be left open as it
closed. But upon reading and re-reading the proposed final chapter for The
Malevolent Mugging, I just couldn’t feel good about closing the story there
and marking it “Complete”, even though I would be immediately starting the
sequel to continue things.
At
this current time, I have determined that, like some novels, The Malevolent
Mugging will be one big story comprised of two parts. The chapter I just
put up today marks the end of Part One, and the next chapter should be the
beginning of Part Two. Since I have publicly announced these intentions in the
story itself, I hope I won’t end up changing my mind and reverting to the
separate sequel idea again.
Part
Two will continue the threads of plot that have been left open, including one
of the important writer-created character’s disappearance and the continuing
aftermath of Deputy Sampson being attacked. Various clues and plot threads will
also entangle Daniel Conway and his nemesis Warner Griffith from The Daring
Decoy, and the characters will discover that those people’s problems will
have a direct bearing on the case at hand.
Instead
of further confusion with Daniel and Sampson looking so much alike (considering
that there’s already the Amory and Andy thing), I have half a mind to have
either them or people around them think that they do not resemble each other
that much, and be perplexed when anyone suggests it.
Also
present will be a mysterious woman named Virginia, who claims to be a distant
relation of the Petersons’ and demands inclusion among the recipients of a
departed Peterson family member’s will. She quickly becomes a fixture around
both Amory Fallon and Daniel Conway, seeming to be trying to stir up trouble
for them both while coming across as completely innocent and oblivious. Amory
suspects she is trying to drive him mad by making it look like they’re having
an affair, while with Daniel she appears to be attempting to frame him for
illegal activities.
I’ve been attempting
to write for Deputy Chamberlin, furthering my idea of him and Sampson being
friends. I’m finding, however, that Chamberlin is difficult to get a voice on.
While it’s true that both he and Sampson canonically spouted dialogue written
for Hamilton, Sampson delivered it with more flair and personality and it was
fairly easy to find a unique voice for him. Chamberlin still doesn’t feel very
developed, no matter how I try to work with his character in scenes. I’m hoping
that as it goes on, I’ll be able to figure it out.
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